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soviet drop down eight nuclear bomb to the empire ,their military force have

impaired to some extent .they cant maintain the warfare any more .
soviet strictly keep the following  principle:
no matter cant be solve by one drug ,If exist double two
no matter cant be solve by tax punishment  if exist double two

一筋縄ではいかないことを行けるようにして
if crossing time cant solve the problem once a time, then ought to enforce twice again

crossing time twice  again  
but this time ,result in more messy
after the yuri failed into the fight before ,the united states and soviet dont

make possible enable for one method that cant solve everything



allow the technology of yuri party leak to other country ,and send their

military force to guard San Francisco,they consider this territory of yuri will

be the trigger of the war .once ,one party in the adversity situation ,they

will conclude to resort nuclear power attack to sweep everything,meanwhile ,steal the technology  of yuri

in time .initially be considered  as trigger factor yuri technology replace by

the japan ,because the empire japan appear by accident  is  beyond the soviet‘s prediction when they crossing time

at the beginning .then soviet destroy the japan with nuclear bomb ,the

comprehensive power of soviet be in the lowest minimum point  cant deal with the

rest thing ,even they hold the technology of yuri .They cant revert the fragile

situation .



so they use the time machine again ,but the result become more worse

,in the time of the war among  soviet,japan ,the united states .the technology

of yuri was occupied by china .soviet be forced to cooperate with china to

counterattack the united states ,and japan what a pity guy they are in the middle fo two  party  And suffer crossfire between them

japan imposed the  the unprecedented damage .
at this time ,the Europe party prepare for

something and noticed by japan .japan dispatch ambassador to the

Europe,negotiate with them "in the disturbance of the world ,you cant maintain

the individual stance  without any party ,if you intend insist  maintain the isolated condition  .but the rest party will allow this situation ,no ,they will preside everything regardless your own volition.

thus japan and England form an
union based on 転石苔を生ぜず(A rolling stone gathers no moss.) and understanding of insular culture (the character of island nation where they onw )  ,they

start the first step of alliance,and in order to get the enough  power to

confrontation of japan ,china ,the united states .they  renaissance the ancient

ritual :
and the second step of alliance begin :
union jacpan formally set up ,the ancient evil are  eventually resurrection.The

coalition they form threaten the all  Europe continent and all the world .  



RA4 Urikago   三つ巴の戦いが繰り広げる
union republic
union jackpan
United States


ソビエトは原子爆弾をはちめに日本投下する、ソビエトの戦力は著しく削られた、すてに戦線維持は不可能である。
ソビエトは以下の原則を頑なに厳守する
あらゆる事は大抵薬一つで解決する、もしできない場合なら倍にして
あらゆる事は大抵罰金で解決する、もしできない場合なら倍にして

一筋縄ではいかないことを行けるようにして

もし一回タイムスリップで問題の解決に繋がらないなら、二度め行わればよい

.
そして二度めのタイムスリップを行われている
思いもよらないことが起こる、災厄の結果をもたらした

ゆりが戦闘に負けたあと、アメリカとソビエトはゆりの技術を互いに流出を許されない、彼達は各自に軍隊をSan Franciscoに派遣し技術流出を防ぐために、彼達はゆりの技術を戦争のトリガーと認識する。もし一方が取り返しの付かない状況に陥たら、即座に核兵器を用いて相手を破壊する、同時にゆりの技術を奪い取る。最初に、トリガーと思われるゆりの技術すでに日本に成り代わって、日本の現れるのはまったくの想定外のアクシデント、タイムスリップを行われるソビエトは予想を外れた。だから、始めに日本に対して徹底的に核兵器を行使し、その結果として、日本は壊されました、ソビエトもう戦力は尽きました。いま、例えばゆりの技術を手に入れるとしても、この劣勢を逆転できない。だから、ソビエトは再びタイムスリップを行われる。でも事態は一層悪化された。日本、ソビエト、アメリカ三つ巴の戦いもう一度繰り広げる最中に、中国がゆりの技術を独り占めにして、この由由しき事態はソビエトを交渉に強いられた、中国との協定を結び、連盟を結成した。可哀想な日本は中国、ソビエト、アメリカにいたハサミになった、挟み撃ちされた。日本は空前の被害を被る、その時ヨーロッパの勢力が蠢き始める、イギリスを主に各勢力が抬頭し、その兆しが日本に気つかれた、日本は使者をヨーロッパに派遣する、ヨーロッパと交渉を行われる、この動乱なご時世、誰にでも中立的な立場に立っていられない、例え貴様がそう願いと、他の国はきっとそれを認めない
だろう、そして君たちの意思を無視して容赦なくヨーロッパ全土を蹂躙するだろう
そして日本とイギリスは”転石苔を生ぜず”にもとつく、連合を結成した
第一段階の結成は:
アメリカと中国に対抗する力を得るために、彼達はいにしえに伝えられる忌まわしき悪魔の儀式を蘇る
第二段階の結成は;
union jacpan を成立するこのいにしえの悪魔とうとう復活を果たした、彼達はヨーロッパ全土ないし全世界を恐怖に覆わせる






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soviet drop down eight nuclear bomb to the empire ,their military force have impaired to some extent .they cant maintain the warfare any more .
soviet strictly keep the following  principle:
no matter cant be solve by one drug ,If exist double two
no matter cant be solve by tax punishment  if exist double two

一筋縄ではいかないことを行けるようにして
make possible enable for one method that cant solve everything


if crossing time cant solve the problem once, then ought to enforce only crossing time twice  again  
but this time ,result become more messy .
after the yuri failed into the fight before ,the united states and soviet dont allow the technology of yuri party leak to other country ,and send their military force to guard San Francisco,they consider this territory of yuri will be the trigger of the war .once ,one party in the adversity situation ,they will conclude to resort nuclear power attack ,meanwhile ,steal the technology in time .initially be considered  as trigger factor yuri technology replace by the japan ,because the accident are  beyond the soviet when they crossing time at the beginning .then soviet destroy the japan with nuclear bomb ,the comprehensive power of soviet in the lowest minimum point  cant deal with the rest thing ,even they hold the technology of yuri .They cant revert the fragile situation .so they use the time machine again ,but the result become more worse ,in the time of the war among  soviet,japan ,the united states .the technology of yuri was occupied by china .soviet be forced to cooperate with china to counterattack the united states ,and japan expose sweeping  in the two party ,suffer the unprecedented damage .at this time ,the Europe party prepare for something and noticed by japan .japan dispatch ambassador to the Europe,negotiate with them "in the disturbance of the world ,you cant maintain the stance without any party ,if you intend insist  maintain the stance without  involve the war .but the rest party will allow this situation ,no ,they will preside everything regardless your own volition.thus japan and England form an union based on 転石苔を生ぜず and understanding of  culture of island ,they start the first step of alliance,and in order to get the enough  power to confrontation of japan ,china ,the united states .they  renaissance the ancient ritual :
and the second step of alliance begin :
union jacpan formally set up ,the ancient evil are  eventually resurrection.The league they form threaten the all  Europe continent and all the world .  



RA4 Urikago   三つ巴の戦いが繰り広げる
union republic
union jackpan
United States






第三版修订
wage a war
.They cant revert the fragile

situation
mark




comprehensive power mark
And suffer crossfire between them  mark
imposed the  the unprecedented damage mark
the individual stance  without any party  mark

renaissance the ancient

ritual :
and the second step of alliance begin :
union jacpan formally set up

mark



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in its combat phase, was a war waged by coalition forces from 35 nations led by the United States against Iraq in response to Iraq's invasion and annexation of Kuwait.
原来coalition跟wage才是正解,第三种diction方式relevant material


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An array of nations joined the coalition, the largest military alliance since World War II. The great majority of the coalition's military




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红警里面用的是alliance



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You are sharing other s people S generous to keep your reputation in BBS hypocritical gay
自分の威厳を維持するために、他の人を糧にして、すけえ偽善者もの


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To its foes, it is brutal, shallow and hypocritical.

对敌人,它残忍、狭隘而伪善




diction 对于英语来说是很重要的



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diction 对于英语来说是很重要的

对日语来说也是

但是如果你的阅片量惊如天人

diction 对日语来说  完全没意义

英语你要参考文献,你要见过同类型文章

日语完全不需要这么麻烦,直接凭感觉



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diction 对于英语来说是很重要的

对日语来说也是

但是如果你的阅片量惊如天人

diction 对日语来说  完全没意义

英语你要参考文献,你要见过同类型文章

日语完全不需要这么麻烦,直接凭感觉



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我就问一句,谁敢用这个单词在写作里面
posit
[ˈpɒzɪt]
(posited, positing)

[with obj.]assume as a fact; put forward as a basis of argument
假设,假定;设想


一般是 使用assumption
使用 posit 就是查词典方法
使用assumption 就是 diction 经验方法


同样 wage a war launch· a war

也要自己判断



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级别: 精灵使者
只看该作者 1楼 发表于: 04-29
The timeline Kurisu survive :

Okabe exclaim desperately

"jump,transfer to the past quickly "

then as consequent Kurisu and Okabe are hurted , Suzuha died , Itaru is in controled by sern agent and Kurisu, Okabe,Itaru are bring to sern headquarter.

Okabe in the next half of years at the mercy of aphasia considered as the leftover of the backup of the memory .He is immured in a isolated room.

Moeka return to the base ready for the next order .Kurisu and Itaru are forced to work for sern to develop the time machine in the headquarter.

In the next two year

Kurisu develop the trial version time machine.

Moeka is the first people to accept the experiment. As the signpost in order to testify the effect about time machie ,they assign one cellphone to she to keep the connection .
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The timeline Kurisu survive :

Okabe exclaim desperately

"jump,transfer to the past quickly "
then as consequent Kurisu and Okabe are hurted , Suzuha died , Itaru is in controled by sern agent and Kurisu, Okabe,Itaru are bring to sern headquarter.

Okabe in the next half of years at the mercy of aphasia considered as the leftover of the backup of the memory .He is immured in a isolated room.

Moeka return to the base ready for the next order .Kurisu and Itaru are forced to work for sern to develop the time machine in the headquarter.

In the next two year

Kurisu develop the trial version time machine.
Moeka is the first people to accept the experiment. As the signpost in order to testify the effect about time machie ,they assign one cellphone to she to keep the

connection .
Assumption will be failed to experiment on test end up into budiman ,but this experiment out of prediction moeka is sended to the past successfully ,but cern dont receive  any message about the budiman ,and no way to confirm the result whether the experiment successful or`not .this successful outcome is completely unkonw  for cern .they send the D_mail to the pass ,no reply come back
moeka who sended to pass ,wake up with the side effect ,lost the memory ,only the cellphone be place in front of her ,now moeka basically action by instinct .and wait or the message from the cellphone ,obviously moeka cant send the message  to the future . f

okabe take a vow to kill the moeka ,he cant stay in the facility where this people kill the Mayuri.he escape from the jail with itaru ,but kurisu choose to stay in

this because of "I am the most people love to conduct the experiment ".In this time ,cern have send  multiple people to the past .and the timeline gradually change in 。

クリス生き残るルート
岡部 必死に叫べ
”飛ぶ、過去に戻る”
結果的に、クリスと岡部は傷を負う、鈴羽は死んてしまう、イタルはセムに確保された.岡部とイタルはセムの本拠地に連れ去られる。
岡部は次の半年に声を出さないまま、DーMAILの後遺症と疑われる。彼は隔離室に閉じ込められる
萌香はアジトに戻る、待機しています。クリスとイタルは強制的にタイムマシンに手助けをする
二年を経つと実験バージョン.のタイムマシンがクリスによって開発された
萌香は最初の実験者として過去に送り込む、効果認証と連絡の手段として携帯を渡された。
最初の仮定にはこの実験は失敗に終わる萌香はゼリマンになった、でも思いのほか萌香は過去に戻ることに成功した。でもセムは何のメッセージにも届かない、ゼリマンのことも含めて。セムに事実確認の手段はない、この実験が成功するかどうか?セムはまったくしらないまま。
彼達は D_mailを過去に発信する、でも返事はない。
過去に戻る萌香は目を覚ますとタイムスリップの後遺症として記憶の一部がなくなった、ただ携帯が目の前に置いていく、いまの萌香は本能のままに動くそして携帯からのメッセージを待つだけ、明らかに萌香は未来にメッセージを発信するすべはしらない、そしてできない。
岡部は空に誓った、必ず萌香を殺す、彼はマユリを殺したこの施設にいっていられない。彼はここから脱走する、イタルとともに、でもクリスはここに留まるのを選択する。理由はいかにも簡単的に、”私は実験大好きっ子”この時点で、セムすてに何人目の人を過去に送り込む。そしてタイムナイン次第に変わったまま。
minor place but not reach to the critical point.until the Tennouji is sended to the past .everything are radical change ,Tennouji connect to the moeka successfully

,cern discern that the experiment successfully in the end .and eventually develop the timemachie ,cern end up virtually  become the sovereign of the world.cern in

order to protect the timemachine from stealling .they enforce the ruthless policy  toward the world .for example ,brainwashing the criminal ,inscribe the chip under

the eye .
after okabe escape from the jail ,he set up the anti-`cern organisation .In this time ,itaru marry ,and  Suzuha born in the world .



the eve of the Ragnarok (this night after the Ragnarok )
kurisu
kurisu made the miniature timemachine .the size of  timemachine like the satellite only allow one person to get in .and because of the miniature version ,it is  full

of potential unkonwn risk .she ready to go to the past by herself to save  Mayuri
okabe
okabe intend to attack the cern and occupy  the timemachine ,then go to the past to save  Mayuri
at the night after the Ragnarok,he pass one cd to the suzuha ,because of as the observer okabe already know the possible  result when the timeline change ,kurisu will

die ,he still remember "he have  send the three  D-mail to the itaru "














Ragnarok have began ;
robing and defending to the timemachine
when okabe infiltrate to the lab ,encounter the kurisu :
they hold the gun towards each other
okabe :pass the timemachine to me
and the plan reach to the last stage ,the kurisu impossible allow the okabe to hinder her .
kurisu :I have no intention to pass the timemachine to your amateur
okabe :do you forget anything the cern impose on us ?and the action they impose on the world ?as a scientist ,you have nothing about  scientific quality and basic

scientific moral .
kurisu ;I only love the experiment ,and probe the truth ,with your amateur do the homework game is quite boring for me .
all of sudden ,unfamiliar with gun ,kurisu's gun go off by accident ,,kurisu have kill the okabe .bearing  the tear ,kurisu press the timemachine button ,and go into

the timemachine ,murmur :wait me ,I will save us back .

and this time the suzuha witness all the process , she shocked by the fact ,okabe's die signify the fail of Ragnarok ,the fear overwhelming the fighter ,the instinct

of the fighter tell her ,she cant allow the kurisu go to the past ,she must take kurisu down and utilise the timemachine to defeat the cern . therefore suzuha  burst

into the back of kurisu and take her down to the faint ,and go into the timemachine ,jump back to the past .in the timemachine ,suzuha read the CD given by okabe ,cant

help shed the tear ,and shout go back to the past .




the timeline of  kurisu is  killed
doctor  nakabati bring the article to Russia .after doctor nakabati  publish

the timemachine theory .in the next century ,the world ready to deploy the

large scale of war .and eventually escalate develop into the world war 3 with

accelerate speed .
2years later ,cern the first experiment participant is moeka ,moeka conduct the

time travel experiment  on herself .
3years later ,cern develop the stable  timemachine version .the world have

changed but against their expectation ,because there is no way for time

traveller communicate with each other ,and no way to observe ,and no way to

communicate with the successful time traveller.
4years later ,although the way of communication is unaccomplished ,but the cern

still become the governer actually ,because they are own some way to change the

future contingent on their thought ,but the result is deviant ,the way is

unperfected ,but no out of the rail .the world actually proceed with their hope

,and the people around the world are  full clear this fact .It is impossible to

take against the cern .


in sacrifice of kurisu ,saving Mayuri,in the subsequent action for saving

kurisu is failed ,okabe are deeply regret and pensive .
thus okabe contribute yourself to engage how to solve the problem of Law of

causality and  grandfather paradox
4years later cern have controlled the world
okabe set up the anti-`cern organisation ,  okabe rely on present theory about

time travel technology ,realization of the timemachie .
in order to counterattack cern ,and observe the effect of timemachie .
okabe make a record CD ,pass to suzuha
suzuha go back to the past ,following the okabe to save kurisu







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